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    Post by Dread Loche Sun May 05, 2013 1:01 pm

    Name: Ogaze, Lakin (Goes by Loche (pronounced lock))
    Chatango: Kenetsu
    Age: 17
    Gender: Male
    Height: 6’0”
    Weight: 180 lbs

    Appearance: His long, darkbrown hair is well maintained, and during missions and training it is tied back to keep it out of his eyes, while resting and recreating Lakin lets his hair down. He has numerous scars, but none show more prominently than the one that cuts a triple line down the right side of his face, barely missing his eye. He also has a very sharp scar that runs a diagonal from his left shoulder across his back to his right hip. He has several tattoos. On his right shoulder-blade he has a skull with extended canines with two katana crossed behind it. And on his left arm he has a snake coiled from wrist to shoulder, bearing its fangs to his neck. He wears three sets of attire, one for missions, one for training, and a general appearance, varying in color and pattern, for rest and recreation. He wears his headband whenever he is out of his home, varying the location for the various activities that he does.

    His training outfit is just a worn pair of ninja sandals, loose-fitting pants which are also worn beyond any other purpose, just short of being trash. And a tight fitting tank, showing much of his arm tattoo, though he frequently removes it during the heaviest part of the training session. He keeps his hands and feet wrapped with strips of white fabric. When it is cold he also wears a hooded jacket and gloves. With this outfit he wears his forehead protector around his waist.

    His mission outfit, while similar to his training outfit, he wears a short sleeved Tee, and his flak jacket. He wraps his hands and legs with dark blue fabric. His pants and shoes are also in much better condition. His forehead protector is worn on his forehead, to protect it. During extended missions he will wear a backpack filled with various things such as clothes and cooking utensils.

    His relaxation and recreation outfits are quite varied. He has crimson trunks for swimming. He wears wooden Geta, with two inch lift from the planks. He wears denim jeans and a T-shirt, or long sleeve shirt when it is cold under a darkbrown leather duster jacket. If it is cold enough he will wear his flak jacket underneath the coat for extra warmth. He wears the forehead protector tied to his right arm. His hands and feet are unwrapped, though on cold days he will wear gloves.

      Race: Human
      Hair: Darkbrown, Long, Smooth
      Eyes: Hazel, Caucasian
      Body: Athletic and highly toned.
      Ethnicity: Tsuchi no Kuni

    Personality: Lakin spends the vast majority of his time between missions training, frequently by himself, which makes those who do not know him personally to think that he is rather anti-social. This is not true, once his training for the day is complete, he enjoys spending time with friends relaxing. He also enjoys spending time at the beach or other recreational places on his days where he rests after a mission or his rest days during training. During missions he remains focused, and is very professional. In combat he uses a combination of brute force, tactics, and teamwork. He almost always striking out with an ambush, unless, of course, he is ambushed himself.

    Rank/Village Title: Chuunin
    Village: Iwagakure
    Title: Dedicated
    Organization / Team:

    Style Allocation:
    Total Points to Spend: 3


    • Ninjutsu: 2
    • Genjutsu: 0
    • Taijutsu: 2
    • Puppetry: 0
    • Ijutsu: 0
    • Fuuinjutsu: 0

    Kekkei Genkai/Clan: None

    Element: Water, Lightning

    Talents:

    Fighting Styles:

    Weaponry:

    • Kunai [10]
    • Shuriken [10]
    • Tekagi-shuko [2] (one for each hand)

    Starting Inventory:

    • Forehead Protector – Iwagakure, dark blue band.
    • Flak Jacket - Iwagakure
    • Backpack with extra tools and clothing for extended missions, including an extra 10 kunai an shuriken.

    Jutsu Total: 9
    Jutsus:
      Basic:

      Spoiler:


    Background:
    Lakin had a deep respect for the ninja of Iwagakure from a young age, though he didn’t move to the village hidden in stone until he was admitted to the academy. He passed the genin exam on the first try, right on schedule with the rest of his class. He progressed well, and like most genin his team was not approved by his Jonin team leader to take the Chuunin exams the first time they came up. Being allowed to mature properly first, they had the proper skills and teamwork to pass on the first go, though it was still quite difficult. That was four years ago, and though he is still a Chuunin, he has been tasked with many missions and is very experienced both with teams and by himself. The main reason he is still a Chuunin is that he has decided to make sure he himself was ready for the responsibilities that accompany the higher ranking. He will accept the promotion when the time comes.


    Last edited by Dread Loche on Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:38 pm; edited 10 times in total (Reason for editing : update)
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    Post by Shizuko Sun May 05, 2013 5:05 pm

    You can't have 27 Jutsu, only 5 plus the basic jutsu included. 'The dread' isn't a title, One Handed Seals isn't a real talent, it requires the title of "Genius". Those are all of the problems I see currently.
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    Post by Dread Loche Sun May 05, 2013 6:37 pm

    Done edited Yo.
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    Post by Dread Loche Sun May 12, 2013 1:29 pm

    Due to a recent decision by myself, this is now ready to be looked over again.
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    Post by Shizuko Sun May 12, 2013 7:15 pm

    You've pretty much fixed everything, but I do have an optional thing that you would put
    Spoiler:
    for your jutsu, so it isn't an eye-sore, along with adding some colors to brighten up your app.
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    Post by Dread Loche Sun May 12, 2013 8:39 pm

    It has been colorized.
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    Post by Amesuke Sun May 12, 2013 8:44 pm

    Scan the profile to check for any coding errors. Post here when completed.
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    Post by Dread Loche Sun May 12, 2013 9:01 pm

    Fixed, amazing how being off by one character can throw the whole damn thing off.
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    Post by Amesuke Sun May 12, 2013 9:03 pm

    Approved
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